My animation is going to be diffrent to yur sort its foing to be a whiteborad animation i have 1 chartor called neddy who is a tortoise and a boy called jack

Dus any 1 have a storyline

Neddy Walks On With His Head Down Low. Then You See Jacks Big Feet Plop On And Then You See Him Bend Down To See Neddy And Pat Him On The Shell. But Then A Blow Of Wind Comes And Blows Neddy Away Making Him Sad And Misrable. So Jack Chases Him.

that sound really good any more sugestion people

how about the tortoise loses it's shell and they have to search everywhere to find it then they go into a restraunt and they serve turtle soup and they run away then they see the shell in a garbage truck and then they get it back