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I laughed really hard when she said I want my bear! Where is crackersandcheese?
Yeah i've been wondering to. Crackersandcheese never answers anymore
Yeh... Maybe on holiday... You should get an avatar...
Where do i go to get one?
I could create one! For you!
sorry guys. I have been really busy. gosh i've got a lot of catching up to do! chapter 62 is really long but it's really good. I like chapter 64 and 66 aswell!
I like your avatar thetopbun! It looks like a drawing. Did u draw it?
No it is Nick's himself! I only have it!
Yeah it's okay to get me one thetopbun
This next chapter will be funny
Chapter 68: The baby is coming!
The group finds the ladder to go up where the other group went up
Tricia: Okay here we go up this ladder to the other group we go.
Zeke: Come on Hazel.
Sam: Come on go on up Star.
Star: I don’t need you help!
Sam: Fine. [The group climbs up the dark hole and then they make it to the top. Ellen stops to touch her stomach and makes a funny look on her face]
Tracey: Come on Mom don’t stop now you’re almost to the top. [Then they all get out of the tunnel]
Tricia: Looks like its just smooth sailing on from now on.
Ellen: [Feeling the baby coming]
Tricia: What’s wrong?
Tracey: Mom is something wrong with you come on talk!
Ellen: [Gasp] The baby… [Gasp] It’s coming! I’m two weeks early!
Tricia: It’ looks like a spoke way to soon.
Mrs. Black: Ellen stand up and come in this big room here. [The group helps her into the room and she lies down on something]
Gia: No what do we do?
Mrs. Black: I am a professional doctor! Does anyone have any scissors?
Tracey: Mark gave me these scissors for some reason before he left.
Ellen: [Breathless] Isn’t that a little dangerous to have in your pocket hun?
Mrs. Black: Ms. Scott just keep concentration on breathing. Now Tracey go fill this pale up with water.
Tracey: Where did you get this from?
Ms. Black: I just found it over their.
Tracey: Okay but theirs some water down the hall I think.
Mrs. Black: Go quick.
Rudy: Mom is their anything that I can do?
Mrs. Black: Just keep these children away from here they shouldn’t see it.
Rudy: Guys get in the hallway you shouldn’t see this it’ll be to gross to see.
Frank: Hey what’s this in my pocket? Hey it’s a bouncy ball. Maybe my dad gave it to me.
Zeke: Alright come on let’s have so real fun now.
Brenda: Yeah I am like so bored. [They bounce the ball all over the place. Hazel senses when it’s coming over to her and she catches it with one hand]
Melissa: Wow great catch Hazel. [Tracey comes back with the water]
Tracey: I found the water! [Tracey trips on something and spills all over Ellen]
Mrs. Black: Tracey get more water hurry! And while you’re at it find some cloth! [Then we see the baby start to come]
Mrs. Black: Oh it’s coming! [Star is looks at it and then she faints]
Twilight: Looks like she can’t even handle seeing it.
: I don’t think we should look at this we should watch the game their playing.
Twilight: Yeah good idea.
Ellen: [Gasp! SCREAMING!] [Back with the group Mark thinks that he hears something]
Mark: Do any of you hear screaming?
Nancy: Now that you mention it I do.
: I wonder what it is.
Johhny: It could be the ship now let’s keep going everyone we still have a lot to go.
Nancy: You only care about getting us out of here don’t you?
Johhny: We don’t have long to get out. Mark time.
Mark: It’s 4:57 AM.
Johhny: Then we don’t have much time now keep going.
Susan: But what if the others are in back of us and need to catch up.
Wendy: Yeah shouldn’t we wait for them?
: I think it would be a good idea.
Johhny: Guys we would waste time it’s going to take a long time just to get out of here.
Jocelyn: I hope Gia and Zeke are okay.
Mike: I’m sure Gia is looking after him.
cool! how long did it take you to write this chapter?
Cool! Okay I will make you one about saved by bishop!
I just copied it and then pased it on so it only takes one minute. See if you can find a picture of Gromit riving Wallace with the stinking bishop or just a picture of that cheese
I will see if I can get him reviving I'll post the pic tomorrow and you can save it and put it as your avatar...
Chapter 69: Balance over water
Then the group comes the engine room
Nancy: This is supposed to be the engine room where’s all the fire?
Johhny: It’s flooded for now but it won’t stay that way for long. [They walk through the flooded engine room and then they find a hole of water heading off into a hole like a water fall]
Wendy: Well how do we get across this?
Johhny: Mark do you have an axe?
Mark: Yes I do.
Heather: Those are some pretty big pants that you have.
Johhny: Thanks. [Johhny climbs up a ledge and tries to cut it down. He cuts the first one and the first one falls and then he cuts the second one and it falls]
Johhny: Okay let’s go everyone.
Susan: Would it be safe if we fall into the water?
Johhny: No you would be sucked into that hole right their and then that’s the end of your life!
: How did he get over their so fast?
Nancy: Maybe he has the power to run fast without us seeing him do it.
Johhny: , Nancy you two guys are next!
: I’ll be right behind you Nancy. [They go on the ledge and walk across it. They get off of the ledge and are safe]
Nancy: That was easy.
Johhny: Campanula your next. [Lady Tottington walks on to the ledge. Wallace watches her come over and feels in love with her]
Nancy: what are you staring at?
: Huh oh nothing. [Johhny and Wallace help her down]
Hope: Now this will be walking across the train trestle.
Peace: Come on let’s go.
Johhny: Only one person can be on the ledge at a time!
Nancy: Wait how could that be we just went on together.
Johhny: I heard to much squeaking you never know death might happen. [Hope goes first and then Peace goes across]
Hope: Now walking across that train trestle came in handy for balance.
Heather: I don’t you make me forget to ground you to for going across that!
Peace: We will.
Hope: [Whispering] You’ll make her forget won’t you?
Peace: Oh yeah. [Then Wendy and then Susan go across]
Susan: That was easy than I thought it would me.
Wendy: I sure hope the girls will make it over that.
Susan: Yes Sophia was a great balancer on balance beams.
Hope: Come on May this easy!
May: I can not swim!
Johhny: The best thing is to not look down at the fire and say you can do it.
May: Okay I’ll do it for my parents then. [She steps on to the ledge and slowly moves across the ledge and makes it]
Mark: I’m doing this for Spirit. [He quickly runs across]
Heather: I’m glad you made it for my daughter.
Mark: And you know that I love your daughter.
Hope: And she is a great sister of ours.
Jocelyn: Mike do I have to go first?
Mike: I want to see you make it over their Jocelyn now let me see it right now!
Jocelyn: I love you! [She walks on to the ledge and then makes it across]
Mike: That is my wife and now it’s time for your husband to dance across!
Jocelyn: Oh you’re so sweet! [Mike gets on the ledge and he dances across the ledge]
Nancy: Oh brother this is getting so annoying now.
Jocelyn: Mike speed it up!
Mike: Alright I’ll fast dance! [Then when he’s in the middle theirs an explosion]
Mike: Whoa! [He holds on to something. It lasts for a while and then it’s over and then he lets go of the pipe]
Mike: WHOO! I’m safe! [He jumps up and down on the middle of the ledge]
Jocelyn: Mike you really shouldn’t jump up and down on that!
Mike: Why it’s not like I’m going to break… [The middle piece of the ledge falls apart and Mike falls into the roaring water]
Johhny: Oh Mike hang on! [Mike keeps going underwater and tries to keep his head above water. He keeps trying to grab on to things but come loose]
Johhny: Mark do you have another rope?
Mark: Sorry I only carry one in my pocket!
Johhny: Mike keep your head above water.
Jocelyn: Mike hold on get that and get out please! [Mike is heading straight for where the water is heading]
Mike: Jocelyn I love you and the… [Drowning when he goes down the hole]
Johhny: Mark what time is it?
Mark: It’s 5:30 AM.
Sorry I can't give you pic yet! I will give it to you when I next watch it
Okay. Watch it soon.
I can't get a screen shot of it! It says urmm... Quit DVD Player before you use this program! So sorry! I have one final idea encase!
THANKS! How do i put it as my icon?
Thanks! How do you like my icon? This is my favorite scenes of the whole movie!
Cool! I love the icon now!
Chapter 70: Water coming our way
Back with the group in the hallway. People are looking at Ellen and her baby. Star is still fainted on the ground and Clair is putting a sponge on her.
Tracey: Oh finally out. Boy my hand kills.
Ellen: Now you know how your fathers hand was when I had you and your brothers.
Melissa: I think she had the baby now.
Hazel: Hey is it a boy or a girl?
Mrs. Black: It’s a girl.
Tracey: What are you going to name her Mom?
Ellen: I was thinking of naming her after your Dad I’m sure he would have liked that.
Tracey: Mom you don’t want to name her Peter it’s so… boyish.
Ellen: Actually I was thinking of naming her your father’s middle name Toni.
Tracey: I think that sounds good.
Star: How long have I been out?
Sam: A very long time Star ever since you saw it coming out.
Ellen: You mean her coming out.
Frank: Wow I’m really having some fun here.
Rudy: This is like really fun to be doing. [Then Hazel senses it’s coming to her but misses the catch and bounces down the hallway]
Melissa: Hazel didn’t you sense it coming near you at all?
Hazel: I did but I didn’t catch it in time.
Frank: Well sorry Hazel but who ever drops it has to get it.
Hazel: It okay I’ll find it.
Zeke: I’ll come with you so you won’t get lost. [The two go back down the hallway. Back with the other. The group is walking through the hall when the group starts to hear a big rumbling noise]
Nancy: Johhny what the heck is that noise?
Johhny: Everybody up on this thing!
Lady Tottington: But what is going on?
Johhny: There is water coming our way!
Jocelyn: Is it like how Mike died in that roaring flood of water? [Sobbing]
Johhny: Yes it’s going to be exactly like that except we’re not going to die.
Heather: Thank goodness it’s not going to because I have two girls to ground.
Hope: Mom just forget about that for now this is more serious. [They all get up on the ledge to be safe]
Johhny: Now we all have to hold on to something.
Nancy: When? [Johhny looks down the hall and its coming fast]
Wendy: Oh my god! [Everybody holds on to something. The water comes bursting into the engine room it makes it hard for people to stay on the ledge and bars. Lady Tottington is holding on to a pole but her gloves her fall out of her pocket]
Lady Tottington: Oh no my gloves! [The gloves fall near May on the end and she sees them and catches them leaning very far down]
May: I got them! [Then theirs a big explosion and she falls off but is still hanging on with one hand]
May: WHOA! [May drops the gloves in the water and puts her other hand on the pole]
Hope: Hold on May.
Johhny: Somebody get her up here!
Heather: Peace you’re closest to May you get her! [Peace carefully walks over to where she is hanging and bends down]
Peace: Grab on May!
May: I can’t!
Peace: Your parents would want you to make it!
May: I’d rather live with them up in heaven! [She let’s go of the ledge and falls to the water]
May: [SCREAMING!!] [She falls into the water and takes her through the waves. Then the last of the water comes and stops. But theirs fire all over the place]
Nancy: How could there be fire right now?!
Johhny: I think that there was gasoline in the water to.
Hope: You mean May died in that to?
Johhny: Come on be careful getting down you don’t want to slip in the fire. [Back with the other Tricia in the room sitting down. Then she starts to hear another noise and its sounds different then the fire. Then she figures it out]
Spirit: Trish what is that sound?
Tricia: Theirs a giant wall of water coming to us?
Ellen: Oh you mean that we’re going to drown? I just had Toni she’s only been with me for twenty minutes. And it’s the only time that I can see myself thin again!
Tricia: No this time we don’t have to duck down and it’s just like the fire.
Tyler: So it’s not going to come into this room?
Tricia: That’s right. Now get the children in here to be safe!
Gia: Guys get in here theirs water coming our way but we’ll be safe! [The teenagers get in the room but Tricia and Gia notice that they don’t see Zeke and Hazel come into the room]
Gia: Zeke get your rear end in this room this is no time for jokes. [The noise gets louder and louder]
Frank: Zeke went with Hazel to find my ball it went down that hallway!
Tricia: We have to keep an eye on that hallway when we see them come back.
Hazel: I don’t like the sound of that rumbling noise!
Zeke: Come on hurry! [Then two keep running to the doorway]
Gia: There they are!
Frank: I shouldn’t have had them get the ball!
Melissa: It’s not your fault Frank.
Gia: Come on Zeke pick up the pace like your running to the pizza man! [The water hits the corner of the wall]
Tricia: Come on! [The two keeps running and are close to the door. Zeke stops with Hazel]
Hazel: Zeke why are you stopping?!
Gia: Zachary get over here!
Zeke: I love you Hazel! [The flood of water hits them]
Both of them: [Screaming]
Tyler: Get in the hallway guys. [Tyler pulls them into the hallway]
Tricia: Hazel. [Then it stops. Tricia runs out into the hallway]
Tyler: It’s no use they took her where ever they took her.
Gia: Tyler that was my brother that the wave took!
Tyler: Gia are you crying over you brother?
Gia: [Sobbing] Yes! Yes I am I promised my Mom and Dad to get him out of here with me!
Tricia: Then we’ll have to find them!
Sophie: Trish we don’t even know where they went!
Tricia: I know but if we hear them screaming then we’ll follow them.
Gia: I’m going with you.
Tyler: So am I.
Sophie: We’ll wait here for you.
Tricia: Sophie if we’re not back in forty minutes you lead the way out.
Sophie: I promise.
Tricia: Good luck to you all!
Sophie: We wish you the most of luck.
Jessie: Get Hazel back safely
Cool! I love the avatar!
Thanks. Crackersandcheese what do you thnk of my avatar?
I think your avatar is great!!!!!
I got it for him!
SHE! I'm a she!
Sorry,I always thought you were a boy aswell! Hey thetopbun do u think you could find me an avatar of gromit and his prize marrow for my avatar? Luvin your story by the way SavedByBishop!
Yay! I have now got WandG curse of the were-rabbit. It is sooooooooo cool but I am stuck. Have u two got the game beacause if u have then I need help on the level I am on!
Hi thetopbun! !
Hi! Urmm which one?
Like when him cutting it, splattered in it or...?
what do u mean?
It's okay thetopbun. I was kind of laughing about it. Here's another chapter you can read to my story
Chapter 71: ’s confession
The group hurries through the fire
Johhny: Keep your heads down and don’t breathe the fire in!
Nancy: I didn’t know we had to go threw all of this!
Johhny: Well theirs a door up ahead of us. [The hurry to the door and get inside and theirs no fire]
Susan: Oh finally we’re out of that and no burns on me.
Johhny: See that’s why I said toy cut your dresses.
Nancy: I wish I still had my dress on.
Heather: Don’t worry you look beautiful right now.
Nancy: do I really look pretty or is she lying.
: She’s lying.
Nancy: I wish I had a hand mirror.
Nancy: Uh thanks. [She looks in her mirror and her hair is very ratty and is very dirt and has smudges on her whole body. Nancy drops the mirror to the ground]
Mark: Hey that was my best mirror!
Nancy: I look…
: Nancy its okay I look like that to.
Johhny: Threw here. [Johhny steps into it and the a second after fire shoots out]
Johhny: [SCREAM!] [Johhny jumps back and it hits him in the leg]
Jocelyn: Johhny are you alright?
Johhny: No it hit my leg.
Jocelyn: Then you probably can’t walk.
Johhny: No I’m going across right now to show you that we can all make it. [Johhny gets up and limps to the lasers]
Nancy: He’s gonna die.
Johhny: Just watch me. [Johhny hurries through and the fire blasts out but misses him. Everybody’s mouth drop when he makes it to the end]
: I guess we’re next. [The two of them run across the lasers and make it across]
Nancy: Hey come on this would be a good time to make out.
Johhny: Where are you going?
Nancy: Doesn’t it matter to you?
Johhny: Don’t go too far. [Nancy and go behind a wall and after five kisses pulls away]
Nancy: What’s wrong?
: This feels wrong.
Nancy: You’re right.
: I am?
Nancy: Yeah I should be against the wall not you.
: No not that Nancy you don’t get it.
Nancy: Then what is it?
: It just feels weird kissing you all the time.
Nancy: Do you not feel love anymore when we kiss?
: Not that much.
Nancy: You’ve been thinking of haven’t you?
Nancy: I guess he means a lot more to you them me doesn’t he.
: I love him as if he’s my own son.
Nancy: I guess I’m interfering with you to haven’t I?
: No Nancy you haven’t.
Nancy: I see that you yell at me a lot and don’t want to attack me when we kiss and I can see that you love Campanula more.
: I still want to marry you though.
Nancy: I’d still like to as well.
: And I still invent stuff so you can see more of that.
Nancy: that’s what I love. But how did you loose you thick brown hair?
: My hair cut machine went hay wire.
Nancy: Things go hey wire a lot. But your just so different no that I don’t even know you.
: Nancy everybody changes and I hope for you to change ones we get out of here.
Nancy: I promise.
Nancy: Oh… [She about to kiss but stops]
Nancy: We shouldn’t kiss that much anymore should we?
: Why don’t we just do one for good luck? [The two kiss each other]
Johhny: Alright be careful come over you three!
Heather: Come on let’s go girls.
Hope: Mom shouldn’t we go ahead of you since we can run faster then you?
Heather: Yes you two go first your old Mother will be with you guys soon.
Peace: Did you have to say that Hope?
Hope: Well she’ll go slow in that long dress of hers.
Heather: My dress is only up to my ankles!
Johhny: Well Heather it’s not easy getting through so do you have a scort underneath that?
Heather: Well yes I do.
Johhny: So take it off. [Heather takes her skirt off and leaves it on the ground and she runs across]
Johhny: Great job Heather.
Heather: This is embarrassing.
Wendy: You’ll soon have another skirt on when we get out of here.
Heather: I’m going to loose it if we get killed on this ship and I will kill you!
Johhny: Mark what’s the time?
Mark: 5:45 Am.
Johhny: We don’t have that much more time.
Like which bit in the film?
Hi SavedByBishop. I'm so sorry that i thouhg u were a boy!
How did you guys think that i was a boy?
Great chapter! When he's splattered in it please!
Have you liked all of the chapters? What do you predict will happen in the next story?
Do you guys like my story.
yay! thanks so much thetopbun you are now officialy ma best mate!
it won't let me have it as ma avatar
No problemo! I do stuff like this!
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